As promised...

Okay, so I said I would maybe post my story, and I think I will. I have a few ideas as to where I want it to go, and a few specific scenes I want to add, but I thought I would talk to my professor tomorrow before I do that.

One thing it is missing, however, is a central conflict. I haven't quite worked out what the root of their misery is, but I know I don't want it to be anything too heavy-handed. A lot of it has to do with the close quarters and the heat, but I think there should be something a little more central than that. Also, I was wondering if you all think I should make the setting more specific, or if I should leave it in an un-named city.

I need lots of constructive criticism on this one, so fire away. :-)

( As yet untitled, like all of my stories )

Also, I don't like the "end" much. And I feel like I need more details, or rather, better imagery in a lot of places. I dunno. Help me out here. ;)

As promised, huge icon post ahead!

42 icons in all, including Firefly, BtVS/AtS, and Family Guy. Questions about anything? Feel free to ask and I'll do my best to answer.

As always, comment if you're taking one, and credit in keywords if you use one. Also, showering me with praise and adoration is also welcome.

Enjoy!

Preview:

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( Firefly )

( Buffy )

( Family Guy )

Brushes by all the usual suspects, including but not limited to quebelly, dtissagirl, saava, isabellecs, and crumblingwalls. I think.