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I keep opening up the update page, but nothing's been coming out. So I thought I'd post my creative writing assignment instead of trying to write about what's been going on the last few days. I was going to wait until I had worked on it a lot more, but I think I'd rather get some more feedback before I do that. The assignment was to write a scene in which two characters are having a boring coversation without making the scene itself boring. I was having a lot of trouble actually getting my characters to talk, so I know the conversation needs fleshing out. Also, I'm pretty sure the characters themselves could use at least some more physical description.

So, please. Feedback/constructive criticism is my anti-drug. Or something.

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